the table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries
The provided table illustrates the variations of 65-year-old seniors and above in three countries, namely Canada, Germany and UK between 1998 and 2030.
Overall, from 1998 to 2030, the number of elderly people aged 65 and over steadily increased in Germany, Canada and The UK. The figure for older people in Germany reached the highest point, while The UK experienced the smallest percentage of 65-year-old seniors and above.
In 1998, the number of German in their sixites was 20.45%, which was the country with the largest elderly population, followed by Canada with 16.32%. The UK showed only 14.23% of the elderly and ranked the lowest position. After two years later, the percentage of old people in Germany and Canada rose by roughly 5%, however, the quantity of elderly in the Uk grew insignificantly nearly 0.6%.
Looking at the prediction of the elderly rates in 2030, Germany and Canada will continue going up to by 5%. Suprisingly, seniors from UK, who are 65 years old, will rise sequentially from 14.89% in 2000 to 20.35% in 2030. By contrast, this amount is still less than the percentage of older people in Germany and Canada after 22 years.
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- the table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98974358974 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57670747918 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3069594025 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.111111111 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126941472248 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563057032832 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351946278115 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890200627203 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363114719067 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.