Some people say that the Olympic games don’t have a role to play in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

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Some people say that the Olympic games don’t have a role to play in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

Internarional sports competitions uplift the profile of  different nations in terms of reputation, financial and social matters. Presently, some proportions of people assert that olympic games are worthless to be organized in a country. Here, I would like to discord with given statement.

There are manifold points to shore up my view. First and foremost, organizing international sports like olympic games offers platform to many talented sports persons to earn name and fame for their nation by winning international awards. As a results, they can not only glorify their family status but also...

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