You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Mr.Brown,
Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of the spirits. My name is Samvedna Puri, one of your tenants dwelling at Haward Street, North London. I am inscribing this piece of epistle to express my dissatisfaction in regard of wooden material furnished at the residence.
Since, it has been only a month at this place and paying hefty amount as rent therefore ace facilities are being expected from you. Inspite of that we are inflicting discomfort as the beds are comparatively of small size. Moreover, the one leg of dinning table is fragile and there is invariably a risk of collapse anytime along with that the knobs of wooden doors are hardly in good condition.
Even though we are gratified with other services but a single thing can cause inconvenience in living. Thus, it would be highly appreciable if you could replace aforementioned items as soon as possible. Otherwise, negligence at your part would force me to look for another apartment.
I anticipate a prompt response from your end.
Your Sincerely,
Samvedna Puri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Brown
Dear Mr.Brown, Hope this letter finds you in radia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08426966292 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83213497411 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.719101123596 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0906862738 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2727272727 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176456899545 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616536423233 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400259329637 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925155296263 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166956759061 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.