Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals, during festival period,people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves.
What extent do agree and disagree?
It is true that some people argue that religious and traditional festivals are providing a great time to have fun and no longer remember the original meaning of them. I totally agree that enjoyment seems to be a priority during the festival times. And I disagree that in this contemporary era people are unaware of the reasons behind them.
On the one hand, traditional and religious festivals leed great opportunities to enjoy people. The most celebrating Indian festival is Christmas. Individuals eagerly look forward to this festival due to long period of holiday. Therefore, they tend to take this time to do shopping,decorating home and enjoy traditional meals with families. Moreover, they display lights in front of their home, which illustrates that darkness is disappearing around the world. In addition, most people would prefer to commute abroad during this occasion. So that they unwind their stress of work. Although, they can be seen different cultures and costumes which give them a sense of new experience.
On the other hand, I disagree with the idea of forgetting the real meaning of festivals. In India, children are taught the reasons behind this religious festivals at their primary school. However, families play a vital step to passing knowledge of festivals on to the next generation via celebrating festivals every year. In this way children generally be learnt the stories about these religious occasions at an early age.
By the way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm that enjoyment must be a primary goal. And still people are being aware of the reasons of celebrating traditional festivals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, in addition, by the way, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17870722433 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89526187276 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570342205323 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0316183318 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.1176470588 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334215594276 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100765136605 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695332469227 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198360080466 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918654524836 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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