Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views give opinions.
Children’s starting age for formal education nowadays is a highly charged topic that shows no signs of abating. While many people strongly believe that their offspring should have an early commencement of school life, there is a more persuasive argument that the 7 might be the appropriate age for them to go to school.
On the one hand, early education can help students integrate the society sooner. Standardized behaviours and socialization skills will be directly transferred by trained teachers or instructors, which; indeed, would be instrumental in their academic path and further development in the future. Furthermore, parents, especially mothers, will be able to come back to work sooner after maternity leave. According to many researches, a number of mothers tend to suffer autism after giving birth and raising children due to lack of communication and home suffocating feeling. Therefore, leaving children at school supervised by teachers may firmly ensure mothers to reintegrate the society.
On the other hand, children are advised not to attend to school until the age of 7 because of the perception aspect. For entering the community, they need to earn enough physical and cognitive development, which enable them to understand the subjects and, more importantly, to self-protect, which should be learned from their parents through daily activities. Additionally, the period from the age of 4 till 6 critically forms the basis of a child’s characteristics, so it is beneficial to give them space to self-develop in advance with the help of their parents to figure their own interests and be embraced fully in parenthood.
To recapitulate, after analyzed from multiple perspectives, early formal education might be beneficial to some extent. However, I would support the idea that children should not attend school until they turn 7.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39175257732 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0916072601 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625429553265 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.886096087 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191386857331 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067573884054 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367713958795 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12313599949 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400249483152 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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