Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ternational news as one of their subject,think some people.By other people opinions th...
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... one of their subject,think some people.By other people opinions this is a waste o...
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...ernational news as one of their subjects,because they are adults,not children and they s...
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...f their subjects,because they are adults,not children and they should know and study...
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Suggestion: They
...hould know and study international news.They should know about their problem,improvm...
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...ews.They should know about their problem,improvment and their news about country.They are n...
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...improvment and their news about country.They are need for this news,because they hav...
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...bout country.They are need for this news,because they have sujects named Constitution,In...
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Suggestion: , International
...use they have sujects named Constitution,International idea of Independence and etc.They shoul...
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...tion,International idea of Independence and etc.They should know all their internationa...
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...ernational idea of Independence and etc.They should know all their international ne...
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...ernational idea of Independence and etc.They should know all their international ne...
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...ndependence and etc.They should know all their international news,because they ne...
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...hould know all their international news,because they need it for this subjects,if they ...
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...rnational news,because they need it for this subjects,if they do not know about it t...
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...s,because they need it for this subjects,if they do not know about it thr can not u...
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... about it thr can not understand themes.They should know,what happened in their coun...
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... about it thr can not understand themes.They should know,what happened in their coun...
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...n not understand themes.They should know,what happened in their country,what news,how...
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...ould know,what happened in their country,what news,how much problems are in their cou...
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...what happened in their country,what news,how much problems are in their country and ...
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...happened in their country,what news,how much problems are in their country and what ...
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...at they should do to help their country.Not only secondary school students should s...
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...ernational news as one of their subjects,but also high school student. But other pe...
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...e. Other people think it is a waste time,because they think, that it is unnecessary,that...
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...cause they think, that it is unnecessary,that they are children and they do not need ...
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... children should study only the subjects,which are in the school program.They want tha...
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...ubjects,which are in the school program.They want that their children should study o...
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...to study, which are necessary for their.It is their opinion. In my opinion the se...
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...ternational news as one of their subject,because it is necessary for their.If child want...
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...bject,because it is necessary for their.If child want to become a policeman or in ...
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...tional news and do not skip one of them.Not only school children,but whole of human...
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...kip one of them.Not only school children,but whole of humanity should know their int...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39426523297 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41787048025 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.379928315412 0.561755894193 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 237.141835196 49.4020404114 480% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 250.833333333 106.682146367 235% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.5 20.7667163134 224% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.500568260166 0.244688304435 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.376862654776 0.084324248473 447% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.200392021742 0.0667982634062 300% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.432968145248 0.151304729494 286% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.193103319674 0.056905535591 339% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 13.0946893788 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.87 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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