You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Neighbours,
I am writing this letter to you to explain the reason of the noise from our house yesterday. It was because I just celebrated my 50th birthday and it was an unusual situation as we just make birthday one time per year and yesterday was one of my happiest day. I hired a band to make a special party for me, my family and friends.
In the next time if it happens again I will let you know and I will take some action to provide a better way to celebrate some special thing that happens in our life for everyone. For example, I could turn down the music and ask to my guests to talk more quietly to follow the rules of the building and streets.
I want to say that this noise is not going to happen again and if I need to celebrate something I will do it in a public place to respect all my neighbours.
I completely understand your complaining and I apologize for that.
Kind regards,
Igor Falcao.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30681818182 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45051752841 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6680372622 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.75 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162032775204 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076264190949 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096437907734 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101683579726 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563612581736 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.