You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
When some people are famous and they use to post everything about his life in a social media like Instagram, Facebook or something like that. It is hard for the person who are famous to have a quiet life nowadays that everyone like to give their opinion and start to judge others. Moreover, it is boring when everything that you want to do is harder when you are famous and always have some people looking to you and judging you even when you go to the beach with your family and the journalists is always taking photo when you want just relax and enjoy the beach with your family.
Sometimes famous people are treated unfairly by the media but it is not always like that it depends in which situation you are living and why people is saying this bad thing about their life. However I believe that is the price when you are famous and you use to give space for everyone watch your life when you are recording everything that you are doing in your life on a social media.
In my opinion people who are famous should have a private life because they are human like us and everyone need to have some time and space to relax, to think about their life. Sometimes fans are inconvenient when they want to know everything about the life of the person who they likes and the most of the problems about the relationship between the fan and the famous person is when the fan are disrespectful and start to invade their personal life making it annoying.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
When some people are famous and they use to post everything about his life in a ...
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Line 2, column 193, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...saying this bad thing about their life. However I believe that is the price when you ar...
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Line 2, column 257, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...s the price when you are famous and you use to give space for everyone watch your l...
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Line 2, column 382, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'medium'?
Suggestion: medium
... you are doing in your life on a social media. In my opinion people who are famou...
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Line 4, column 282, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'like'
Suggestion: like
...g about the life of the person who they likes and the most of the problems about the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41947565543 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15322909065 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430711610487 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5175435406 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.571428571 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1428571429 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257865570014 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148981710746 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650624061276 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205127818137 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473850177699 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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