Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?
No one can deny that there are advantages and disadvantages how computers have affected people life. Some people agree with computer bring so many benefits in daily life. However, there are other people who believe that computers are not the best tools because it could be complicated and stressful to handle it. If I were to choose one, I prefer to used them for several reasons that I will develop in the following paragraphs.
First of all, in this times, companies are updated their work process with new technologies such as computers and laptops. In order to do more efficient the work, companies have invested in computer. In my case, both for working and and friendship I love to use the computer. I am working in an international company which the head building is in Argentina, and I am living in The United States. As a result, the best way we can keep in touch as fast as possible is trough the network. Also, I use the internet to communicate with my family members and friends.
Second, shopping this day became easier trough the use of computers. There are so many things that people can buy on the internet than ever before. I have to admit this viewpoint have been influenced by my own experience. As I am working ten hours a day, and when I finished I am so tired. For example, If I have to go shopping, I go on the supermarket website and I order all things trough it. To be honest, this way it so fast and efficient.
Finally, studying became so important in these years for people to keep update and continue being competitive in the work market. Since the computer came up, the courses on the internet increased. I believe that take a course using this took is incredible easier and cheaper. For instance, I have made a master degree in agriculture las month. I saved so much mony and time taking it on the network. if I have to move until the university, not only I need free days on my work but also I need spend more money in traveling, eating and sleeping place. For this reason a prefer to use computers to do those courses.
In conclusion, for all above I already mentioned I certainty choose computes making easier my life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...following paragraphs. First of all, in this times, companies are updated their work...
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Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
... computer. In my case, both for working and and friendship I love to use the computer. ...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'things'' or 'thing's'?
Suggestion: things'; thing's
...the supermarket website and I order all things trough it. To be honest, this way it so...
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Line 4, column 400, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...mony and time taking it on the network. if I have to move until the university, no...
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Line 4, column 567, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ing and sleeping place. For this reason a prefer to use computers to do those courses. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5358974359 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62896049183 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528205128205 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4575113686 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.7083333333 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238548978447 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640586107376 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676564876954 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140471416395 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074861303131 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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