You recently went to a restaurant but think you could have left your credit card behind.
write to restaurant.
Tell them when you went there.
describe where you think you may have left the credit card
explain what you would like the restaurant to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am John, dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle to inform you that I mistakenly left my credit card in your restaurant. As I got my permanent resident card last week, thus in order to celebrate this special moment of my life with my friends I arranged a small party at your restaurant yesterday.
As I am a teetotaler, thus I do not prefer to sit in the bar. However, due to heavy rush manager asked us to sit in the bar. Owing to poor lighting system in bar I forgot to pick up my card from table after the payment of bill. When I realized that my card was missing, I immediately lodged a complaint at reception but all in vain.
I have already contacted with your loss and found department, but they are enable to find out my card. It Would be highly appreciable if you check your CCTV cameras as your whole building in under the surveillance of cameras. Please feel free to contact me reading above cited matter on below mentioned contact numbers
I am anticipating a prompt reply from your side.
Yours faithfully,
JOhn
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
..., dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle to inform yo...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enabled'.
Suggestion: enabled
...loss and found department, but they are enable to find out my card. It Would be highly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58080808081 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57560407544 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686868686869 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4417915244 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184186760331 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624314470319 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577870416184 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918537225158 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060306281428 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.