Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A glance at people's attitude toward their influence on the society brings to the light a question that has been asked several times, namely, whether they can influence future of society or not. As a educated member of the American society, I believe that people have equal opportunity to participate in decisions making process of U.S.A. Although some of my friends think that politics does not allow us to speak up our voice, I repute this statement.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that in the past people could not oppose the king and queen, so it was nearly impossible to talk about their opinions. In contrast, democracy allows people to tell the government what they think and what they want via voting system. All people in a country has the right to choose their president, representatives, and senators. Thus, our decisions have direct impact on the future of society.
Another subtle point that I should deem is the fact that virtual applications such as Instagram, Twitter, and facebook, provide us a great opportunity to make the comments on different decisions. For example, president Trump banned all travels to America from seven specific countries, which most people showed their objection on Twitter. After one month, supreme court supported people and Donald Trump finally had to change the travel ban. This example clearly illustrate the effect of social media and people opinions. Therefore, each individual has the power to make decisions about society.
Nevertheless, my colleagues assert that ordinary people do not have professional knowledge about important fields such as economy. As a matter of fact, we should not allow uneducated individuals to decide about our country because it has bad effect on the overall condition. However, I declare that the first sign of a developed country is having knowledgeable people. So, we must try to educate others to make the correct decision and compel politicians to pass necessary bills. Therefore, this concern even if is important, we should solve it instead of eliminating.
Due to aforementioned argument explored in the previous discussion, I highly recommend people to believe in themselves and their opinions. We build our country not only with our hard work, but also with right votes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... influence future of society or not. As a educated member of the American society...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, in contrast, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.144 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76397652346 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602666666667 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7994118757 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.166666667 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17852816191 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513018140337 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389167414311 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942112692878 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327793715322 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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