You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Manager,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I am interesting to buy an electrical good at your shop. I would like to ask you if you still have the controller for the Samsung TV which I cannot find at my house. If you have this product could you please hold this product to me until next Monday? because I am travelling through the company that I work. Moreover, I will arrive in Brisbane at 10:00 pm on Sunday, so I will not be able to go to the store to buy it.
Please send to me the price and how long you will be able to hold this product to me. This product is really important to me because my TV only works with the controller otherwise, I cannot have access and I have an important meeting through my TV this week.
Yours sincerely,
Igor Falcao
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...d this product to me until next Monday? because I am travelling through the company tha...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d this product to me until next Monday? because I am travelling through the company tha...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, so, still, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 632.0 937.175257732 67% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18543046358 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32328603436 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562913907285 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 190.8 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8965459031 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317942344798 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12843525841 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095523683322 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255322365835 0.12726935374 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115794225187 0.0580467560999 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.1 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 41.2886597938 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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