People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Making a decision is something to ruminate upon as it could have a life time impact. Therefore, in making choices which could be life changing, a person has to be in the right frame of mind. The prompt suggests that people who make decisions based on sentiment and defend the resolution reached afterwards are known as bad choice makers. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the statement that individuals who make decisions based on their present circumstances and rationalize those decisions afterwards are seen as people with poor choices for three reasons.
First of all, as humans being faced with a lot of challenges in our day to day lives, there is a tendency of making some rash decisions, due to the present predicament and later regret such actions. For instance, a 20-year-old girl, who is a fresh man at the university, meets a guy who is also a fresh man, they fall utterly in love with each other due to their definition of love. Sooner than is expected, the young girl and boy tell their families they want to spend the rest of their lives together, simply because they think what they feel for each other is enough to want to settle down as a couple, they eventually get married and realise it was just infatuation and decide to path ways as they can no longer bear each other’s excesses. However, if those fresh year students were more insightful about life, then they would have understood that such a decision was not one to be taken so trivial, hence the need for proper consideration, rather than an ephemeral one, when deciding on an issue that can affect a person. This example illustrates that if a person bases decision on sentiment then the person is likely to get burned.
Secondly, even if we assume that some issues in life require immediate decisions, one has to think deeply before coming to a final conclusion on certain matters. For instance, a boy who studied mechanical engineering and graduated from college applied for jobs in various companies, some of the organizations he applied to were not directly involved in mechanical engineering, but due to his desperate need, he sent his resume. The boy was offered a job by a non-engineering firm, with a huge salary package and a good position, although not engineering related. Nevertheless, he put the job acceptance on hold, with the hope of being called by one of the engineering firms. He was later invited for a test, he scaled through and was also offered a job with a low income package and a position which was stressful, that notwithstanding he took the offer without considering how little the pay was, so he did not put his emotions first by taking a job with more pay which he may likely abhor in due time. Besides, its best to ponder on things and make clear headed decisions without being hysterical.
Furthermore, majority of the times people have made choices based on sentiment, with logic backing which usually do not turn out in their best interest. What is more, these decisions due to emotions. For example, a lady owned a boutique, where she sold feminine clothing. she never sold clothing on part payment, it always had to be full payment. On one occasion, a customer who is friends with the owner of the shop, came to shop and asked to make half payment and she could not refuse. When it was time to make the remaining payment, the customer claimed the clothes were poor quality and ended up not paying completely for the clothing she took. Obviously, the store owner let her take the items, which was a decision based on her emotions, and the outcome was a negative one.
Finally, it can be inferred that most decisions made based on emotions are poorly analysed, therefore an individual needs to look inward rather than outward before making conclusions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3126.0 2235.4752809 140% => OK
No of words: 657.0 442.535393258 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75799086758 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06280665599 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66018477875 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 339.0 215.323595506 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51598173516 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 985.5 704.065955056 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.6476150124 60.3974514979 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.913043478 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5652173913 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.04347826087 5.21951772744 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273775872524 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08486514286 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781707122565 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171564058951 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943795120094 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 100.480337079 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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