Some people think homework is necessary for children to get good marks in the examinations, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Homework is necessary for children to get good marks in the examinations. However, there are other people who disagree. Personally, think that this issue has some advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly, homework bring many benefits. As I already mentioned, it helps students understand subjects more deeply. Also, young people learn how to arrange their time to have all things done on time. In addition to those practical benefits daily homework teaches students how to make their own research if something is not clear. Curiosity is one of the main reasons that learn a person to success. students learn to do their research, work with different kinds of informational resources such as Internet, books, magazines, journals, and newspapers. I think it is a great experience, and it is very good for a long run, so children can get marks in the examinations .
From other, homework can bring many disadvantages. For instance, if a person has no interest in biology, but has a huge interest in music he has to spend his precious time doing his homework and reading uninteresting books instead of spending time practicing new melodies. Another important aspect of this is that a student can have no time for his physical activities,so, basically, doing daily homework will not keep him in a good shape.
In conclusion, homework could be frustrating for a child as it increases study time, but it is a beneficial method for gaining good marks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, as to, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10084033613 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97752768572 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613445378151 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4075850038 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7142857143 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 4.34317383033 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257037720758 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981355195301 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11373833991 0.0603063233224 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18775437694 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121024016207 0.0580467560999 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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