You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
My name is Jot resident of Sector 22b, Chandigarh. I am writing this to enquire about the equipment I need for my house which is a hand blender.
I am a regular customer of your shop but due to some problem I am unable to come to your shop hence, I thought I should write to you to know about the availability of the product. The hand blender, I am looking for is cello companies product with a four juice glasses and portable.
Also, I would like to know whether you can deliver the blender at home if possible as I cannot physically come to collect my order. Furthermore, kindly let me know the price of this product.
I will be able to visit your shop after one month please let me know if you are having the blender that I need but are unable to deliver just inform me how long you can hold it.
I actually want to buy my blender for my home from your shop only as I trust your products. I look forward to the instant reply.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 92, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...our shop only as I trust your products. I look forward to the instant reply. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, hence, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21390374332 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35307486251 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572192513369 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4459910975 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177791136499 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579051686419 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737437734612 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100642650315 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738094811232 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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