Advantages and disadvantages of online shopping
In the recent years, besides existence of many brick and mortar stores, a numberous of online stores have appeared . Many customers prefer to go online shopping because they recognize positive features. However, besides its benefits,online shopping also brings about disadvantages.
On the one hand, online shopping give us many advantages.It often provides us with lower prices. We can compare prices easily and quickly. The internet is crammed with the websites which offer automated price comparison. In addition, online merchants have chance to pay less with coupons which help them save money. Secondly, saving time is one of the benefits of online shopping. In stead of going from store to store and comparing products and prices is time-consuming. We can visit a plenty of stores and purchase items in other cities or even around the world without leaving our home. Besides, these products will be delivered directly to our door.Finally, it is a convenient method.Web-based stores and commercial apps are opened 24/7. It means that we can choose items when we have spare time. Thus, we can make purchases whenever we want. This way is helpful to busy people and the older adults who are not always able to go to the market.
On the other side, online shopping has some drawbacks. First of all, the customers cannot try products before making purchase. For instance, we order a T-shirt on online store but we cannot try wearing it and know it fits our body or not. Therefore, it can waste money if we cannot turn back it. Furthermore, there are so much unreliable store that we cannot discriminate. In some cases, the products that we receive might not similar with what we see on screens. Finally, many people are addicted by going shopping online , which leads to waste money and time. Because of cheap products and fast method, many customers tend to this way. Besides, there are some people especially the young are glued to the screen to surf and buy items which affects study process as well as eye problems.
In brief, I believe that when society has become more modern online shopping is prefered by almost all people.Online shopping's advantages help people have an easier life but its disadvantages sometimes cause lots of troubles.But if people are intelligent consumers, they will avoid these troubles,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in brief, as well as, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 5.60731707317 678% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 965.302439024 201% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 385.0 196.424390244 196% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04935064935 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 3.73543355544 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70845904324 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 106.607317073 211% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 283.868780488 217% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
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Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4652658326 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0416666667 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253291767802 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674437331026 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096395967815 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189704420541 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102567398921 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 40.7170731707 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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