It is better for young to get advice from older people than young people. Do you agree or disagree?
The younger generation need suggestions in the due course of life. Some people believe that young should take suggestions from the contemporary group; however, I believe that youths should take suggestions from older people. I am of this belief as the suggestions provided by the older group are based on their experiences. The older group also support young people if the younger generation follow the advice suggested by older people.
To begin with, generally, older people have experiences of the ups and downs of life, which are obvious. Aged group’s advice is based on these thick and thin through which they have passed. Different events that happen at the stages of life, such as loss of family members, financial struggles, working with people showing various personal traits and so on have matured the older people enough. The recommendations provided by aged people, thus, would be practical.
In addition, older people provide support to deal with problems that encounter young. Young people can ask to untangle challenges faced if young people tasks align with the recommendation of seniors. For example, many South Asians starting businesses according to the idea of seniors receive the support whenever they face challenges, whereas those youths who begin works without the guidance of elder people have to deal with obstacles on their own. Therefore, to ease the social, technical, financial hurdles in their work, youths should take advice from the senior advisors.
To sum up, older people’s recommendations are based on true events of their lives and they support youths if the advice of seniors is considered. I believe taking suggestions of the aged group is one of the ways to respect their values which helps to thrive an organisation to a higher level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67402594184 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534722222222 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9371032972 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284107734207 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110397056536 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957054280441 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174202739257 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673384853098 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.