The essay topic is " Life is better today than it was 100 years ago. Do you agree?
Life has changed nonstop for years. The quality of life has more improve than before, which meets demands of people undoubtedly. Truthly, life is better now than 100 years ago in some aspects such as advancement in medical science,development in technology and improvement in form of transportation .
Firstly, the advancement in medical science has gradually improved, which helps their health become better. People use to die in the last century even on the slightest health disorder but now the death and disease rate has reduced.This improvement is able to battle with deadly disease. For example, nowadays thanks to medical development our country research into the vaccine to against HIV.
The development in technology is one of the differences between nowadays and 100 years ago. We cannot deny that technology helps our communication become easier. In stead of sending letter to keep in touch with others, we can connect to someone in other countries or even countries around the world through Zalo, Gmail, Facebook and so on. This method is not only quick but also money-saving .Moreover, these technologies can be used for entertainment as reading news,watching youtube and playing games.
In addition, the mode of transportation has modernized than before . In the last 100 years, people often travelled to somewhere on foot, by bike or they rode house ,but these day the masses prefer to use bus ,motorbike or car because they are the fastest and time saving. Thanks to appearance of modern transportation, travelling become easier and more convenient.
In conclusion, it is clear that our life become better and better day by day. The quality of life has improved effectively.The advancement medical science, development in technology and appearance of modern code of transportation are the main feature which create distinction between at these days and 100 years ago.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28666666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08847930911 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9734441063 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.733333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172040053436 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634872585573 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714233686739 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105449552788 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084929397146 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.