In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles.
What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
In recent years, it is true that family structure and family roles have observed significant changes. In my opinion, those alterations can have positive impacts on family members.
Obviously, the modern family is different compared to that in the past in terms of its pattern and responsibility of some family members. Firstly, extended families nearly disappear and become nuclear ones. To be more specific, while the previous families tend to include more than two generations, families nowadays are only composed of parents and their offspring. Regarding transformation in the members’ roles, a huge number of women in the family have an occupation outside instead of doing chores solely as in the past. This also means that family households are now shared among mothers and fathers.
I believe that the aforementioned changes are positive because of the benefits they might bring to the family. First of all, fewer members in a family can reduce the number of conflicts, leading family members to live more comfortably. It can be understood that when there are only parents and their children, the generation gap is less significant than having grandparents to live with, which means divergence rarely appears. Another benefit of the transformation is that working mothers can help to tackle family financial issues and ease the burden of males. Whereas in the past, only men had jobs and they were obliged to work tremendously as breadwinners, women now also go out to earn salaries and support their family.
In conclusion, family patterns and members’ roles are quite different from the past, and I hold a strong belief that these changes can promote better family life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, whereas, while, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20588235294 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78357142825 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577205882353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.252060028 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.923076923 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273543123133 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102050821749 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732738302719 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189623545639 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541945126278 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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