In the past several decades, the quality of global environment has deteriorated rapidly, threatening lives and sustainable development of millions of people all over the world. Because governmental bodies have enough financial and political powers to conduct environmental protection campaigns on a large scale, they play the principal role in solving the problems. Nonetheless, I believe that it will be a fundamental mistake if we underestimate the essence of individuals in this battle, which I will discuss here.
Generally, politicians and experts know what and how to do to tackle issues relating to the environment at a macro-level. It can be said that the sufficient human resources, coupled with scientific knowledge and the competence of monetary policies allow governmental organizations to effectively handle ecological catastrophes such as oil spills or forest fires. Politicians, more importantly perhaps, have the obligations to formulate long-term strategies which assure a thriving environment for present and future generations.
Notwithstanding the significant role of legislators mentioned above, I think civilians are also an important factor contributing to the successful outcome of the fight against environmental crisis. Not only are individuals able to preserve their environmental milieus by planting more trees, recycling household waste or using ecofriendly products, they are taxpayers who have the legal right to oblige politicians to act for the sake of their well-being. Besides, the voices of environmental activists, for example, Greta Thunberg can constitute an exemplification of the power of ordinary people who are influential and persuasive enough to raise the alarm about the global ecological threats.
Ultimately, neither politicians nor civilians will remain safe if our survival on earth is imperiled; therefore, both sides should be involved in protecting the environment.
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- Films were produced by big companies in the past but today people are able to make a film Do you think this trend is positive or negative 89
- More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 84
- People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 73
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents an 36
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89285714286 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4158693279 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.1222567474 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.0 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157591275689 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051690734803 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408585368341 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081912538607 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102969013532 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.8 11.3001002004 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.18 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.95 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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