Some people believe that finding a job is essential after graduation, while others believe that continuing education proves to be more essential. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
With the increasing awareness among people, education is main focus even in poorer families. But after completing basic eduaction some people choose to earn money while others are of the view to further their education. This essay will discuss both the views and will highlight how getting further education is beneficial.
To begin with, some people want to start a job as soon as they finish their basic studies. This may be due to an economic pressure faced by the family to meet their ends. In some cases, people want to start their next phase of life such as marriage. For instance, one of my cousin who was a very good student of engineering but he was more excited to get married than to study further.Therefore, in some cases people are not interested to continue their education due to different reasons.
On the other hand, with the growing competition day by day, some people want to excel in their field by pursuing higher studies. With better qualifications they open more opportunities for themselves as well as they tend to get better placed in highly competitive fields. For example, in Pakistan one can be directly hired for Grade 18 job in engineering department if they have Masters degree with 1 year of experience while with Bachelors there is a requirement of atleast 6 years to be considered for Grade 18.
In conclusion, some people may choose to find a job because of financial pressures while others tend to improve their qualifications to stand out in the market. In my opinion, education should be continued as with the passage of the time most qualified people will be able to compete in the market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...ng awareness among people, education is main focus even in poorer families. But after comp...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...ed to get married than to study further.Therefore, in some cases people are not intereste...
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Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'job' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'jobs'.
Suggestion: jobs
... one can be directly hired for Grade 18 job in engineering department if they have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 31.9359605911 160% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82918149466 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75912501739 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569395017794 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.65517241379 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3892935584 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.083333333 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9166666667 7.25397266985 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211177067196 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814661610067 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449044023599 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140136833562 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049787590586 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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