It is said that a growing number of people tend to buy food products which are produced overseas instead of consuming typical plates . While a number of factors can explain this trend, some countries have taken measurements to reduce the consumption of imported food.
Heavy marketing is the principle reason why inhabitants consume food from abroad increasingly. Anyone have become a target audience for the marketing industry, even toddlers or old people. They are swayed by advertisements to adopt the values of the consumer society, possessing more and more things which, they are told, will bring them health, happiness. This leads to residents think that overseas food goods bring more benefits than local cuisine despite of their cost.
There are three measures that would be effective in tackling the rise in the popularity of imported food. Firstly, governments should raise taxes on the import of food goods to encourage people buy more local food. Secondly, the more campaigns about local food's consumption are held, the more awareness can be raised.For example, in Vietnam, a campaign called" Vietnamese buy Vietnamese products" gains certain achievements. Last but not least, more preferential policies for consuming regional food good should be imposed.
In conclusion, marketing is the main reason for the rise in consumption of imported food but measures can be taken to combat this trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: The pronoun 'Anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...e food from abroad increasingly. Anyone have become a target audience for the market...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'foods'' or 'food's'?
Suggestion: foods'; food's
...econdly, the more campaigns about local foods consumption are held, the more awarenes...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... held, the more awareness can be raised.For example, in Vietnam, a campaign called&...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...res can be taken to combat this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40540540541 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83300200848 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617117117117 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0160662038 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.090909091 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453495339276 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175561262863 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131867085978 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254642494671 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123075830032 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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