All people should stop consuming meat, otherwise their health is in big risk. I completely agree with this point of view. Althouse, it still sounds very revolutionary for some of us, each year more and more people become vegetarian or even vegan.
This is not a theory any more that meat could damage our body. Lead universities performed scientific researches that have proven that meat eaters live shorter and have more heart attack, obesity and other diseases. For instance my coworker who was suffering from obesity went to a healthy lifestyle workshop, after it he stopped consuming meat, this boosted his energy and he was able to exercise more and lost his weight. Finally he became more happier person than he used to be.
Moreover the quality of affordable meat source food deteriorated and became unhealthy for our diet. Processed meat is cheap but it actually could contain a lot of unhealthy elements like fats and only a low percentage of meat itself. In many cases these cheap products are most reachable to most of the population. And people are consuming cheap fast food and harm their health. Whereas, a vegetarian source of food is a budget and fool of plenty of any nutritions that our body needs.
In conclusion, a healthy diet determines our wellbeing. We should encourage people to consume more vegetables. Perhaps, some regulation should be done according to how to decrease consumption of processed meat. Or even the health system should advertise meat less diet in case to have less people that should be cured.
- Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet What are the causes of this problem How could it be solved 61
- Everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Smoking not only harms the smoker but also those who are nearby Therefore smoking should be banned in public places To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group while others would rather work alone Discuss both sides and give your opinion 61
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...dvertise meat less diet in case to have less people that should be cured.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, if, moreover, so, still, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94594594595 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59376710467 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598455598456 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1794899803 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0625 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134940747248 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456965879175 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351727032773 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090895335005 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437994013156 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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