Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Business conferences and training courses are taking place more and more through the internet. Although there are some positive results of this trend, I believe that they are outweighed by the negative effects.
On the one hand, companies switching training activities and business discussions to the online mode has many advantages. First of all, it deletes the concept of geographical distance. Instead of having to gather one place to face-to-face interaction, people can talk together at any time and anywhere, this offers staff saving a huge amount of time that could be better spent on other important tasks. This helps boost their work productivity to contribute to the development of their companies. For example, one staff is on her/his business trip through online communications he/she still can catch up with different projects of the company. Secondly, this online mode of operation could help companies economize on expenditure by not having to pay for commuting costs, printed documents or equipment for carrying out the meeting or training procedures.
However, I am convinced that this option has two major drawbacks. Firstly, communication in the form of online can be a hindrance as there might be failures in the flow of information. For example, in VietNam, not many people can afford a high-speed internet connection, and as a consequence, lagging connection or computer crashing can cause disruptions, reducing comprehension among meeting or training participants. Furthermore, online meetings depend heavily on the reliability of the internet connection due to the low level of security involved in cyberspace. According to Hiscox's survey, as many as 73% of companies really do not know how to fight hacker attacks. As a result, attacked companies lose credibility and have to compensate huge sums of money. For example, on average, a successful cyberattack costs the company $3.86 million in 2018, for businesses in the U. S it is $7.91 million.
In conclusion, despite some benefits of staying at home and participating in discussions or training sessions, the drawbacks far outweigh such benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3963963964 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10127202264 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603603603604 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0860917896 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.705882353 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176223384363 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502685061097 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512076350123 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107430670973 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102915996167 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.