Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Many may thought that history is the only one subject which is essential in schools. However, In this modern era, some people believe that science and technology are crucial rather than history. In my opinion, history may be beneficial for student but other subjects have the major role in our daily life. In this essay we will contrast both sides.
Firstly, To learn about our past, history subject is the best to adapt knowledge. In other words, a lot of historical places in this world history introduce us about that. For instantiate, when a person visit a really old place, so there will be many things to understand but without knowledge person can not even knows exactly what is this. For another example, my friend went to India last year and he visited a lot of historical places but with the lack of knowledge, he did not enjoy that moment.
On the other hand, medical subjects is inert of individual's life. In general, without doctors imagining the world is horrible, how can a person deal with his injury? So interacting children towards to science is worth. Development and high tech informational studies is also have a key role in our life. For instance, a person want to go somewhere by walking he will reach that place in 2 hours, Instead of walking person chooses to go in train and he went there in few minutes, So technology is basically consume less time and so on.
To concluded, history is important subject although, science and technology is much more beneficial for every individual. I thing that schools should make a choice on that like history is not mandatory but the other subjects are compulsory and i thing that it would be a great idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: Much may; A good deal of may
Many may thought that history is the only one su...
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Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'know'
Suggestion: know
...t without knowledge person can not even knows exactly what is this. For another examp...
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Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...high tech informational studies is also have a key role in our life. For instance, a...
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Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consumed'.
Suggestion: consumed
...few minutes, So technology is basically consume less time and so on. To concluded, h...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: YOU_THING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'think' or 'thinks'?
Suggestion: think; thinks
...more beneficial for every individual. I thing that schools should make a choice on th...
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Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: YOU_THING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'think' or 'thinks'?
Suggestion: think; thinks
...the other subjects are compulsory and i thing that it would be a great idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, so, for instance, in general, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7337883959 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5560975407 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569965870307 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6993497561 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242558516283 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835018330788 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708317577563 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162450545846 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918021985251 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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