some people agree with spending lot of money on a large wedding.while other think it is a waste of money .what is your opinion?
In the contemprary era , to spending lot of money on lavish marriage become an intrigued contraverisal issue now a days.because few of people ponder that spending large amount of money on occassion is lucrative in soceity whilst other claim for it.This essay will elucidate people notion before reaching to final conclusion.
First and Foremost , In the inflation era , most of people stimulate to pay out money for show off their status that how much they are rich.Secondly , masses want to celebrate and share happiness of their life with their relatives , friends and families as well as hold up great memories for future.For instance , I recently attend marriage of my friend in five star hotel , we all enjoyed alot with multi cusine , capture pictures with friends , so it was unforgetable movement for us.
On the flip side , few of them say that Payout money on lavish wedding means plunge money into water.Secondly , A poor person could not spend much money such type of occussion if they take loan from bank after that whole family should be grappled with debt and their joy took away from their life in coming years.Thirdly , To booking cars , rooms , allocate some expensive gifts like gold , diamond jewellery to relatives could not be afforable by normal person .
In conclusion , we should required to save money for future like both couple can use this money for their children education and during worse condition instead of spending money on lavish marriage and show off their status level .so we should take up further foot step to alligate it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98841698842 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61338955356 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667953667954 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.273267867 49.4020404114 330% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 258.4 106.682146367 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.8 20.7667163134 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.8 7.06120827912 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211773726779 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109790748463 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845863299293 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137125612564 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721004165054 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.0 13.0946893788 214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.55 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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