Preventing people from committing crime has been one of the controversial issues among authorities. Therefore, in most of the countries the number of criminals is growing. This essay mentions the hard economical situation as its principal component, also there will be a discussion about way of tackling this menace.
To begin with, as long is the number of people who commit crime increases the society become less secure. The most considerable reason for criminals is the bad economic situation and they believe that, this is the easiest way of providing their basic needs for livelihood beside its dangers. Therefore, robbery and burglary will become their prior option in order to tackle whith financial problems. A poll conducted in Oxford university states that about over a fifth of the convicted people respond lack of job opportunity as their main reason of doing unlawful action.
Moreover, not only hard economic circumstances have negative effect on citizens of one country, but also it doubles the government duties to prove a safe position. There are various ways of combating whith this crisis, for instance: government can pass tightened laws and punishments for those who commit law breaking in order to show others about the consequence of this action. However some believe that this is against humanity and does not meet the criteria of justice.Meanwhile, they opine that, government should intervene in altering the worst situation to decent opportunity, by offering different jobs which matches whith each person's worthiness. A prime example of this is Canada, which has various careers on offer and examine the candidates before being eligible.
To sum up, it is on authorities to maintain safety for people of their country, accordingly a feasible way to provide satisfactory jobs in order to assist them whith meeting their initial and vital needs to deter them from committing criminal offences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...s growing. This essay mentions the hard economical situation as its principal component, a...
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Line 5, column 381, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...s about the consequence of this action. However some believe that this is against human...
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Line 5, column 474, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...d does not meet the criteria of justice.Meanwhile, they opine that, government should int...
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Line 5, column 637, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...different jobs which matches whith each persons worthiness. A prime example of this is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30718954248 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83190629795 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59477124183 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1457729983 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.333333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0629398360317 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278768761776 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398474005349 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0383170633742 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302299935789 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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