Countries with long average working hours are economically more successful than those countries which do not work long hours.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is an undeniable truth that in recent decades, with the rise in competition there is gradual rise in working hours in most countries. At issue is whether having long average of working hours is beneficial for a country in terms of economy. For all the possible short terms economic benefits that long working hours might have, it would be in all our interest if its long term negative impacts on economic progress were considered more seriously.
Being at work for long hours is sometimes erroneously seen as a good way of driving to a better economic growth. It is sometimes argued that staying at work until late hours, an employee would be able to fulfill more tasks in short space of time, making it more efficient and suitable worker. The fact, however, is that the extended working schedules adversely affect the efficiency and productivity of workers. Being overworked for long period of time can cause many physical and mental problems to employees making them more and more disappointed about their job and their future of the country. Losing productivity and sharpness of the brain as a result of not having enough time to rest and recover, is a telling example in this case along with several physical diseases including obesity, fatigue, muscles and joint problems which cause serious problems to an employee not only at the workplace but also in the personal life.
Other essential factors of driving a successful economy which can improve productivity along with reducing working hours of employees that should be considered instead of increasing work hours. For example, using the new and innovative technology might come across as a costly action at first blush. Be that as it may, using innovative technology such as computers and smart phones and new telecommunication technologies enables companies to increase their performance in producing goods and facilitates communication and cooperation between firms which indeed will help them to have greater income in long term. Adding to this is the fact that investing a proportion of the budget on educating and training employees with the modern science and technologies indeed worth more than forcing them to work overtime.
On balance, a long average working time of a country is not proportional to its economic success but there are some factors like technological development which results to startling growth of a country’s economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...y of workers. Being overworked for long period of time can cause many physical and mental prob...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, for example, in short, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15776081425 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81383291371 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529262086514 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3214091989 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.923076923 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2307692308 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323294918836 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127593462619 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899127189907 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226503212914 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721579928031 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.