People are becoming too dependent on the Internet and phone. Is it a positive or negative development?
The inventions in the field of technology have drastically impacted human life. Nowadays, dependency on the internet and cellphone has increased among people. Some people believe that it is a negative development because it has lower down the physical interaction between the people however, in my opinion it is a positive development.
To begin with, earlier there were handwritten letters and mails which usually took a long time to reach the recipient, however, with the invention of the internet and mobile phone people can access their Gmail accounts or social media accounts while sitting in any corner of the world. Additionally, businesses have expanded irrespective of border between the different countries. For instance, the father company of Adidas is located in German, however, it is able to control its showroom all over the world just for the sake of the internet.
Apart from above, the internet is recognized as an education hub by most of the thinkers because it possesses a huge amount of data. In other terms, one can easily access information about any topic either from the different websites or can even attend tutorials in order to grab more knowledge. Additionally, one can even share information by using various platforms such as YouTube, Facebook, or Instagram. To illustrate, a survey done by “The Time” reveals that around 76 percent of educational institution possess social accounts for delivering knowledge to their students.
To conclude, might some people have a viewpoint that these technologies have negatively impacted the human race, however, these inventions have faded boundaries for businesses and became knowledge junction for most people around the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, apart from, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38805970149 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85666923962 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608208955224 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2094569091 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.272727273 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176789070772 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590999291563 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744386202206 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114526932909 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913907918231 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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