Task 2: VERSION 2 - 28/05/2020
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In any historical period, wealth has always been expected to go with humanity because the wealthy have their own substantial power, and resources of the society. Although it has been argued that the critical aspect of being rich is taking care of individuals and their families, the help to people who are less fortunate, such as the is such a crucial value that the rich can be considered for their spiritual welfare.
Firstly, the rich have always exerted a substantial impact on society. By the wealth, the wealthy contribute more than ordinal people to the charity resulting in higher efficiency. For example, Bill Gates, one of the top global billionaires, can be conducive to save the life of millions of children in Africa by his donation to the research about water sanitation. Besides, the rich are less reliant on the financial and political pressure in their voluntary activities. In comparison, the low-income groups are more reserved to help other people as they have not ensured their personal life.
Secondly, the property can satisfy almost demands, except for the spiritual one, which is merely existent in the humanitarian activity. This kind of activity seems just like mental relief because it brings happiness to them. Specifically, the entrepreneurs thrive at the expense of other competitors; hence, they are susceptible to guilt complex and want to take steps to feel free. By contrast, the support to other people is considered to be the social responsibility of the fortune and the reimbursement that they earn from society. In recent years, this attitude has been determined by the fact that some billionaires donated almost their property to a voluntary.
In conclusion, being rich provides adequate power as well as resources for elite individuals to help other people. It plays a pivotal role in the spiritual life of the wealthy and relieves their guilt complex.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, except for, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14563106796 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82875295823 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556634304207 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.373787722 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148580344735 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485861049376 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388737838352 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917930473595 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181963946413 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.