When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is currently a contentious argument over the importance of a building’s function in comparison to its exterior appearance. I totally agree with the idea that a construction’s purpose should be more valued than its appearance for a number of reasons.
On the one hand, it is undoubted that a magnificent looking structure can bring many benefits. At first, it can considerably raise the value of a construction, especially a shopping center, as it looks more professional and attractive. The more customers are attracted to the building, the more profit it can obtain. Additionally, an erection with an aesthetic design can contribute to the appearance of a local area, and also make it become a famous tourist destination on the travel map.
On the other hand, I am of opinion that a structure ‘s use should be prioritised. Each building has its own purpose and its outer design should afford the purpose.To illustrate, when a company intends to erect a new office building, they will option the design which help them enhance the operation of the staff and the enterprise and create energy efficient. Therefore, if an erection is unable to meet the basic needs of its owner, its external decorating is not worth considering.
To conclude, in my opinion, a building’s use should be prioritised although there is no doubt that outward appearance is n important factor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
... outer design should afford the purpose.To illustrate, when a company intends to e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, therefore, no doubt, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16537552042 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609649122807 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0360065142 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242058096401 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082597549058 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796556683088 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157978644961 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081052732695 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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