Some people say that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
As the quality of life keeps improving, more and more parents are doing their best to earn more money for their children as they believe that money is the best present for them. While I partially agree with this point of view, I insist that money is not everything for children.
On the one hand, everyone knows that money is becoming more and more important to a family, especially children. First of all, when they start to go to college, parents have to pay a large mount of money for the tuition. In addition, modern technologies, such as computers, smart phones and tablets, also increase the living expenses of teenagers, because they are popular among young people. However, these high-tech products are upgrading rapidly and their costs are also rising. Therefore, it is understandable for some people to claim that money is the best gift for young ones.
On the other hand, even if money is playing a significant role in teenagers' lives, it does not mean everything. For instance, some parents might spend so much time earning incomes that they neglect another thing which is also critical to their children, love. Teenagers grown up without sufficient love from their families might not enjoy a happy and active life as others. Additionally, teenagers who are spoiled with money might not realize the significance and difficulty of making money. Instead, they might spend the money from their parents for granted and they would develop an unhealthy outlook of money.
To sum up, money is important, but it is not the best gift for teenagers. I believe that people could reward teenagers with money as a form of praise or encouragement when they have a good behavior or performance. In this way, they could teach teenagers the importance of making money by themselves, instead of thinking about how to spend money all the time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, another thing, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57662806067 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544871794872 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.162544077 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.266666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257381277407 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101881655126 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801036578133 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172038645234 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195696741259 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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