Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than in the past. Use specific reason and examples to support your answer.
When the time change, many things are changed, including habit, culture and behaviour of people, and this is the classic quote. While some people believe that the extended family at present is the most crucial than in the grandparent era, and try to persuade them with the numerous reasons, other people insist that the extended family in the modern era is significantly decreased when compared with in the past. From my perspective, I strongly agree with the latter view and think that everything can easily change when time change and I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the behaviour of lifestyle at modern hardly needs the relative with the extended family because of advanced technology such as public utilities or public transportations which can encourage the lifestyle of people. Especially, public utilities are more convenient than the grandparent era, so almost people barely some reasons live in their family homes. For example, someone can move to close his company or industry by renting an apartment or sharing with his friends to work efficiently and come back to visit the grandparents when 1-2 times per year.
Without a doubt, an almost new generation would like to be freedom and someone may be bored with grandparent habits which they are so picky and demanding. He tries to move to rent a dormitory if he is a student or live friend’s home. Moreover, students may save money by themselves with working, which they need not borrow some money from them. This is a good behaviour lifestyle example which will help them to be patient, and try to do by themselves to be a success with their career in the future.
Last but not least, communication by using computer and internet information can suggest and consult new generation easier than asking their grandparents. In the past, If somebody would like to do something, he may need to ask his parents or grandparents because they are more experienced and more connection than him, however, he can search some information and compare data on the internet to consist of making condition which it is more comfortable and fast than asking them. Furthermore, some information from the internet is more accurate than their experience. For instance, an investor would like to invest in selling cars business; nevertheless, both cousins and grandparents do not have some knowledge in this business. Therefore, he researches some information on the internet.
All in all, I can conclude that everything changes when the time change both advanced technology, behaviour and culture. As a result, the extended family characteristics are noticeably declined and also less important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12837837838 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83455050554 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504504504505 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.3904254337 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.941176471 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1176470588 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 5.45110844103 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172469535859 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535348404961 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439812317818 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927441564039 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291557403421 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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