Many people think that zoos are cruel. Others think they are helpful in protecting rare animals. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of the different people. Therefore, this has become a debatable issue whether keeping animals in zoos are unmerciful or it is more useful in preserving behind it. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of views will be elaborated in conclusion.
To begin with, holding animals in captivity, it is definitely immoral as they are not able to have a natural habitat. It is morally illegal to confine some lives in four walls, which are very small area. In other words, due to limited spaces in zoos as artificial environment, it is impacting animal’s natural behavior. To take an example, on the basis of a survey done by the report published in 2018, in Bangladesh, around 500 faunas were dying owing to live in zoos. Consequently, holding on a cage is extremely ferocious for wildlife.
Moving towards the second argument debate, zoos are providing certainly save conditions not only for endangered species but also for humans. To elaborating this, it is very unsafe for individuals, if animals have come out of the forest on the road. For an example, due to the recent lockdown is going on in the Chittagong, where two tigers were out of the forest to the main road. Moreover, good diet is also supplied by zoos. When beasts are in forest, they do not get even foods and because of hunger there are so many species are getting died.
To sum up, according to my perspective, A thing is valued where it belongs. Although keeping animals in custody is not to be a human activities, safeguard in zoos for animals cannot be neglected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 133, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'activity'?
Suggestion: activity
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75609756098 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68801725331 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599303135889 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.097133108 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102067459582 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308682550338 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349705301738 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0599020036796 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106236058335 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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