Nowadays, sport is becoming a big business with high earnings for professional sports people and a lot of companies have involved in financially and in other ways.
What are the advantages and disadvantages?
To date, it is a popular belief that sport has long been overwhelmingly commercialized which is relevant to many companies and the wealthier of top tier athletes. While it is beneficial to some extent, it would to more harm than good.
On the one hand, there is a discernable plus for this relationship which is the influence of money in morale of players. Indeed, it is financial incentives that are regarded as “miracle drug” to promote athlete motivation to dedicate their matches to achieve victory, which appeals spectators to stadium to accelerate revenue to them as well as their owners. In fact, the more money sport clubs have been invested, the more champion cup they have. For example, Manchester United football club, who is received annually over 3 hundred of dollar, has a tremendous of victories which are deemed as a landmark that take them into reaching a peak of this sport history.
On the other hand, it is public doubt about that financial benefit will erode the dignity of society as well as individuals because of two major reasons. Firstly, in the community perspective, authorities have long been concerning about money laundering situation in sport market, which can be detected by overassessing team or individual values. It hence abets business giants enriching illegally. Beside the benefit mentioned above, during the match, players can be bribed into adjusting their performance, followed by the outcome of the match which then is manipulated. As a result, it can be deduced that the unfair sports will discourage the morale of players, leading to diminishing interest of bystanders.
In conclusion, while advantages gained by financial incentives are remarkable, there are also several social problems involved in match fixing incidents and illegal business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90818873672 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607638888889 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1759810868 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155218197561 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05214955514 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333538265648 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857628960166 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138718503475 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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