Lots of people copy the famous people they see on TV. Why do they do this? Do you think it is a good idea to copy famous people?
In this modern era, Many people are attracted towards the celebrities and follow their looks and acting. However, it is depends person whether they get inspiration from them or totally depends on artist although, I believe that copying anyone is a worse idea and it may lead to huge problem
Firstly, Getting influenced by actor makes some people motivated and at the same time depressed. In other words, when a person is watching a gangster, Most-likely to happens that person start imagining that the whole life is like an picture and it impact significantly the mind. In general, Recent news demonstrated that a individual shot other via gun because he wanted to become a criminal, Cyber-cell shared that information world-wide that murder was affected by that kind of movies.
On the other hand, Singers have different interaction among their audience according to their work. Plenty of people look further in a positive way and become successful by adapting their Idol's style. For instantiate, child is interested in singing from the childhood and he do not even knows that so, Musician encourage and he try to sing along with that artist, But sometime person involve artist in their daily life, which usually becomes a issue like when that famous person makes mistake it is more likely followers will do the same.
To concluded, Following famous people is good idea. where as, copying does not make any sense. Nevertheless, if person wanted to copying them it is great to know that facts before copying them though, I will not recommend that person should follow the because some time person get addicted to celebrity, as a result person feel disappointed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, in general, kind of, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03610108303 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61486003351 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628158844765 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.6604365808 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.5 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193719920303 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832396423796 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881996400218 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11216322881 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493271572926 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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