Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
In the passage, the author argues that the declining of the deer population on islands in Canada is the result of the ice melting which covers the ice due to the global warming. This is based on the premise that the local hunters observed that the decreasing in deer population coincide with the current global warming trend. However, on deeper analysis, it is apparent that certain relevant aspects have not been taken into consideration, leading to a number of mistaken assumptions and logical flaws.
One such flaw is the assumption that the ice melting between the islands lead to the decline of the population of deer. It is possible that the ice melting obstacle the capability of deer to travel among island, though the author does not provide any clue that the migration of deer in northern areas is related to their reproduction habits. In order to strengthen his/her argument, the author should mention a research which would provide information about the necessity of cold environment for the reproduction of deer.
Moreover, the author’s argument is incorrectly based on the argument that the incapability of deer to travel among islands lead to deer to have inadequate fauna to thrive. However, the author cites that deer prefer plants in warm areas so the melting of ice in essence should be beneficial for their feed. To overcome this flaw, the argument should be enhanced with more specialized information about the fauna in colder areas where plains are covered with ice, and how important is for the thriving of deer.
After closer examination of the passage presented, it is apparent that there are several logical flaws. The recommendations in the essay show how may the argument may be strengthened and made more logically sound.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 292 350
No. of Characters: 1434 1500
No. of Different Words: 143 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.134 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.911 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.657 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 105 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 79 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.545 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.401 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.411 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.646 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.118 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...istaken assumptions and logical flaws. One such flaw is the assumption that the...
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...ironment for the reproduction of deer. Moreover, the author’s argument is incor...
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...important is for the thriving of deer. After closer examination of the passage ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 16.3942115768 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 2260.96107784 65% => OK
No of words: 291.0 441.139720559 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0412371134 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71684639878 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 204.123752495 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491408934708 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 705.55239521 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8645050901 57.8364921388 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.363636364 119.503703932 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 23.324526521 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.70786347227 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187744821697 0.218282227539 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772831880758 0.0743258471296 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060775060055 0.0701772020484 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10926921213 0.128457276422 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668461987592 0.0628817314937 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.3799401198 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.3550499002 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.32208582834 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 98.500998004 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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