The diagram gives information on the sum of six purchaser products in four European countries.
The diagram gives information on the sum of six purchaser products in four European countries.
Overall,in this scheme we can see that the Personal stereos,Perfumes and Toys of Germany are illustrated similar index,it is around 148 thousand pounds sterling.Very high number illustrated Photographic film of Britain,it is about 172 thousand pounds sterling.Very small number showed Tennis racquets of France,CDs and Photographic film of Germany,around 144 thousand pounds of sterling.
How I said at the to,Personal stereos exhibited the similar number with Perfumes and Toys of Germany and it is about 148 thousand pounds sterling.Personal stereos of Italy and Tennis racquets of Germany demonstrated the similar index too.In the personal stereos of France we can see that,this product displayed 146 thousand pounds sterling.This product of Britain is similar with Tennis racquets of Britain too.Tennis racquets of France explained about 143,it is very small n umber in this scheme.Perfumes of France is similar with CDs,Toys and Photographic film of Germany and it exhibited about 144 thousand pounds sterling.Perfumes and CDs of Italy are demonstrated the same result,it is around 150 thousand pounds of sterling.CDs of Britain is around 164,Toys of Britain is 168 and it is almost similar with Photographic film of France,the last product of Britain is Photographic film showed very big number in this chart,it is 173 thousand pounds sterling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...cts in four European countries. Overall,in this scheme we can see that the Persona...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Perfumes
...eme we can see that the Personal stereos,Perfumes and Toys of Germany are illustrated sim...
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...of Germany are illustrated similar index,it is around 148 thousand pounds sterling....
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Suggestion: Very
... is around 148 thousand pounds sterling.Very high number illustrated Photographic fi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...illustrated Photographic film of Britain,it is about 172 thousand pounds sterling.V...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Very
...t is about 172 thousand pounds sterling.Very small number showed Tennis racquets of ...
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Line 2, column 310, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , CDs
... number showed Tennis racquets of France,CDs and Photographic film of Germany,around...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , around
...nce,CDs and Photographic film of Germany,around 144 thousand pounds of sterling. How I...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Personal
...ounds of sterling. How I said at the to,Personal stereos exhibited the similar number wi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...similar number with Perfumes and Toys of Germany and it is about 148 thousand pou...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Personal
...t is about 148 thousand pounds sterling.Personal stereos of Italy and Tennis racquets of...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...many demonstrated the similar index too.In the personal stereos of France we can s...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , this
...rsonal stereos of France we can see that,this product displayed 146 thousand pounds s...
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Suggestion: This
... displayed 146 thousand pounds sterling.This product of Britain is similar with Tenn...
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Suggestion: Tennis
...lar with Tennis racquets of Britain too.Tennis racquets of France explained about 143,...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Perfumes
...it is very small n umber in this scheme.Perfumes of France is similar with CDs,Toys and ...
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Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Toys
...e.Perfumes of France is similar with CDs,Toys and Photographic film of Germany and it...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Perfumes
...ited about 144 thousand pounds sterling.Perfumes and CDs of Italy are demonstrated the s...
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Suggestion: , it
...f Italy are demonstrated the same result,it is around 150 thousand pounds of sterli...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...similar with Photographic film of France,the last product of Britain is Photographic...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ilm showed very big number in this chart,it is 173 thousand pounds sterling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58636363636 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32618896905 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 176.041082164 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431818181818 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 20.2975951904 360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 360.539410698 49.4020404114 730% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 409.666666667 106.682146367 384% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.3333333333 20.7667163134 353% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 7.06120827912 9% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100535659889 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.282426323604 0.084324248473 335% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.380299504446 0.0667982634062 569% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282426323604 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.380299504446 0.056905535591 668% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.6 13.0946893788 318% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.62 50.2224549098 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 11.3001002004 281% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.33 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.2 10.1190380762 308% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 10.7795591182 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...cts in four European countries. Overall,in this scheme we can see that the Persona...
^^^
Line 2, column 60, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Perfumes
...eme we can see that the Personal stereos,Perfumes and Toys of Germany are illustrated sim...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...of Germany are illustrated similar index,it is around 148 thousand pounds sterling....
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Line 2, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Very
... is around 148 thousand pounds sterling.Very high number illustrated Photographic fi...
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Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...illustrated Photographic film of Britain,it is about 172 thousand pounds sterling.V...
^^^
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Very
...t is about 172 thousand pounds sterling.Very small number showed Tennis racquets of ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 310, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , CDs
... number showed Tennis racquets of France,CDs and Photographic film of Germany,around...
^^^^
Line 2, column 347, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , around
...nce,CDs and Photographic film of Germany,around 144 thousand pounds of sterling. How I...
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Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Personal
...ounds of sterling. How I said at the to,Personal stereos exhibited the similar number wi...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...similar number with Perfumes and Toys of Germany and it is about 148 thousand pou...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Personal
...t is about 148 thousand pounds sterling.Personal stereos of Italy and Tennis racquets of...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...many demonstrated the similar index too.In the personal stereos of France we can s...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...rsonal stereos of France we can see that,this product displayed 146 thousand pounds s...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... displayed 146 thousand pounds sterling.This product of Britain is similar with Tenn...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Tennis
...lar with Tennis racquets of Britain too.Tennis racquets of France explained about 143,...
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Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Perfumes
...it is very small n umber in this scheme.Perfumes of France is similar with CDs,Toys and ...
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Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Toys
...e.Perfumes of France is similar with CDs,Toys and Photographic film of Germany and it...
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Line 3, column 627, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Perfumes
...ited about 144 thousand pounds sterling.Perfumes and CDs of Italy are demonstrated the s...
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Line 3, column 685, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...f Italy are demonstrated the same result,it is around 150 thousand pounds of sterli...
^^^
Line 3, column 840, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...similar with Photographic film of France,the last product of Britain is Photographic...
^^^^
Line 3, column 926, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ilm showed very big number in this chart,it is 173 thousand pounds sterling.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58636363636 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32618896905 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 176.041082164 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431818181818 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 20.2975951904 360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 360.539410698 49.4020404114 730% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 409.666666667 106.682146367 384% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.3333333333 20.7667163134 353% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 7.06120827912 9% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100535659889 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.282426323604 0.084324248473 335% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.380299504446 0.0667982634062 569% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282426323604 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.380299504446 0.056905535591 668% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.6 13.0946893788 318% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.62 50.2224549098 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 11.3001002004 281% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.33 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.2 10.1190380762 308% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 10.7795591182 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.