In some countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Humanity is undergoing a catastrophic challenge under the name Covid 19 which is touching almost all people around the globe. Due to this some countries are confronting economic crisis. Some experts say that it is better that each country concerns about its own problems rather than aiding other countries. I totally disagree with this statement and in my further paragraphs I will put forward some arguments and examples to support my case.
To begin with, the danger through which human beings are going through is believed to be concerning globally. That's to say, to overcome the resulted situation all countries should give a hand to each other for some reasons. Firstly, almost all wealthy and progressing countries are dependent on one another. That is to translate, developed countries have been investing big amount of sum into developing countries' economics. If each country acts independently to stabilise its economic crisis, I strongly consider, it is highly likely to be a big obstacle to get over. I would say that, it is better for all countries to be united and find the solution for the case cooperatively. To prove my statement I will give an example: the Secretary of the UN Antonio Guterres is constantly sending a video message addresing to all countries to be bond and tackle the situation together. According to him, not only developed cpuntries' economics will suffer from the case, but also the whole world will not be left untouched. That's why he says that it is better for all countries to exchange knowledge and help one another both financially and morally.
Secondly, in order economic trends of all countries level off countries should gather and search for the exact steps. I believe that working jointly is the easiest way to reach the goal. There is a saying: " If you want to go fast, go alone. If you want to go far, go together. " I have put forward this saying on purpose that the way to normalise the economic downturn is far so all countries had better to choose to go together.
To sum up, we should finally realise that the given desease has already made it clear that it is high time to look up to one another and act cooperatively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83510638298 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68933876741 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3556761736 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6842105263 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343418049683 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108296381554 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970704119571 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176154061416 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106888225339 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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