In some countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays a great deal number of countries are encountering with poblem in the economic sphere where the governers tend to focus on in their own problems but others affirm that it is not right solution becouse they may loose the relationship between foreign countries. the given idea above somehow true and somehow far from reality becouse it is clearly evident that each country trys to solve their problems by their own therefore they prefer focusing on only to their own problems rather than giving a hand to other countris. For example between 2004-2008 the Tadjikiston wich is the political closed country tried to enhence their economic downturn by their own and diligience is the mother of good fortune coming to this days they suceeded inspite of difficulties which they underwent to be more specificly this country lost diplomatic relationship between foreign country USA. By this word i mean that they may proud of themselvs they never become dependent to the other countries. However on the other hand when the country is always focusing on its own problem it may effect negativly to their econmy. For example as i just wrote above it may affect to the diplomatic relations between countries.For example nowadays arose a big problem which played an essential role in relationships. To be more precise the covid-19 is a good example to this issue i mean that because of these health problem all countries in the world initiated sign friendly relationships, for instance the all counties sends helps to the infected countries for free. By the way of concusion it is fact that we do not have to forget that we were created by god and we are the creature who have their own brain to think it means that each individual have to comprehend that we should give a hand to someone everytime rather than sitting and waiting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...to comprehend that we should give a hand to someone everytime rather than sitting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i mean, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91054313099 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66027731663 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533546325879 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.2628385203 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.125 106.682146367 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.125 20.7667163134 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.625 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302409073034 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121240143092 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077195063902 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151519354466 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151519354466 0.056905535591 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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