Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Competition is a term that has different meanings to different people. For, some it is a highly negative word that hampers the sole cause of an action for others it is a way that inspires and motivates them to move forward in life. Success can be achieved by having a strong vision and determination. People who have the willingness to push their limits and are ready to run in the race of winning can only survive in this today’s world mouse and cat race. According to me, industries and government should be highly competitive to do good to the country and bring forward several revolutions.
Firstly, industries have to have a competitive outlook to have a strong stand in today’s meteorically changing world. To illustrate, there is a constant technology feud between Samsung and Apple. They are constantly outwitting each other in terms of their phone display, sound quality, and better features. This acts as a driving force continuously motivating both the company leaders to take projects of high ambitions. The companies constantly try to achieve a project that can bring about a technological revolution. In this way, the companies are coming up with products that are highly beneficial to the entire world. Had, there been one single ruling technology company with no competitors the growth would have been stagnant as the company does not feel the threat of losing its market. A similar case can be seen between Mercedes and Ford the two-car manufacturing joints who go head to head in bringing the world’s comfort to a driver of their car.
Secondly, government leaders need to have a competitive sense of mind as it helps them undertaking or approving projects which will place them on a global platform. If a country’s leader is satisfied that their country is performing well, this sense is the point where a country progress starts deteriorating. For example, consider the race going on between world astronomical research and development team to make astonishing discoveries about Mars, galaxy and black hole. The feeling of competition to reach the information first is the oil that makes scientists spend day and night in their office. Similarly, the feeling of competition and proving their country’s talent in the Olympics and other International games are the driving force of the sports department of the country. If the Sport minister lacks the desire to win. He/she will not be able to motivate his/her player and would not bring in world-class trainers to train their players leading to the ultimate downfall of the entire Sports department.
Admittedly, cooperation is required to get the task get then faster and the leaders should be willing to listen and cooperate with its subordinates and fellow workers. A leader should have the willingness to listen to the changes suggested by their employees. But, it is also equally important for him to set priorities and be in the race of competition to get his/her goals achieved. If a leader is struck between making cooperation with all its employees it might be not able to conquer the set target.
Even though cooperation among people plays a key role in people’s success but having a competitive mind is a must. A leader must be strong enough to take actions and decisions necessary to achieve the set goals. The desire to win the race is a strong way to motivate people to push their boundaries and limitations. It also helps people continuously thinking and growing in the process to outwit others bringing about great revolutions and high technology in the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 458, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
... this today’s world mouse and cat race. According to me, industries and government should be hi...
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Line 2, column 888, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: head-to-head
...the two-car manufacturing joints who go head to head in bringing the world’s comfort to a dr...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to undertake' or 'undertake'.
Suggestion: to undertake; undertake
...petitive sense of mind as it helps them undertaking or approving projects which will place ...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'country progress'.
Suggestion: country progress
...ing well, this sense is the point where a country progress starts deteriorating. For example, cons...
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Line 3, column 751, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...onal games are the driving force of the sports department of the country. If the Sport...
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Line 3, column 785, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f the sports department of the country. If the Sport minister lacks the desire to ...
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Line 4, column 385, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...petition to get his/her goals achieved. If a leader is struck between making coope...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2972.0 2235.4752809 133% => OK
No of words: 592.0 442.535393258 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02027027027 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93265142912 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86992000459 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 215.323595506 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494932432432 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 901.8 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7666386047 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.32142857143 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294218584269 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713226304202 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591140889681 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177992382668 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719154054802 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.