Some people think that news has no connection with people’s lives; so it is a waste of time to read newspapers and watch television news programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, some people tend to think that news bear no relation to the life of people.Therefore, reading newspapers or watch TV news is absolutely wasteful.For me, I all the way disagree with this
viewpoint.There are some reasons to account for this.
On the one hand, keeping track of news in newspaper or watching TV programmers help people a lot in different ways. Firstly, when people spend quality time to read news, they can keep themself updated with domestic news or foreign news and with what is happening around them.. Furthermore, reading daily news or watching TV are one of the best method as a way of enriching their knowledge and broadening their horizon.For instance, thanks to watching TV news, people just have a keen understanding of Corona pandemic and some appropriate measures to prevent it and build up resistance to against coronavirus. Moreover, somehow those also support in my learning and provide me with the wealth of information regarding my major.
In addition to that, the period of time people spend reading news or watching television as a method of helping people unwind and stay stress free from all thoughts. For example, like me, when I indulge myself in TV news from cover to cover, I forget all negative feelings and only focus on it. This is advantaged opportunities for people to chat with their family in meal as to information revolving news and strengthen family bond.
In conclusion, it occurs to me that no matter what jobs people are engaged in, updating newspapers or watching TV news play a pivotal role in their life.Depending on their hobbies and occupation,people might gain pieces of information when they are exposured to one or the same new items
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94482758621 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95768814175 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555172413793 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0970208068 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.333333333 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2222222222 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6666666667 7.06120827912 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39782950921 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176245582053 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910303486897 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216276227701 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103563913264 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.