Some people think that mental strength is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
In this day and age, people are seem to have a tendency to engage in sport activities. Therefore, it has two different thoughts among people.Some suppose that the strength of mentality is of the utmost importance to succeed in sports while others claim physical fitness is an exact key.In my opinion, I strongly believe that both of them are considered just as pivotal parts in leading to sporting success.
On the one hand, mental toughness is one of the important factor for success in sports. Because having a strong mentality help you have high spirit to play sports.For instance, when you play some kind of sports like football, you are of sound, comfortable and intelligent mind then you could pay an attention to dribble and pass the ball. In terms of this matter, only strong-willed players who are able to handle some problems such as pressure, intense competition to obtain great success in sports.
On the other hand, physical strength is also not less crucial factor. Sportspeople are normally required to be physically fit to meet basic standards in physically of any professional sports.Like football, a match usually lasts 45 minutes and consist of 2 rounds.Because you have to move a lot to conduct movement regarding ball in during the match. So your muscle must work a lot. To do it best, you are forced to be good physical manoeuvres and high stamina.If people do not live up to physical criterias, they may be encounter difficulties to pursue any assortments of sports.
In conclusion, I think that either mental or physical strength are essential to sportspeople when joining in sports activities. As a result, sports players who are new generation of successful sports will be welcomed to sporting industry if they are physically and mentally prepared
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...important factor for success in sports. Because having a strong mentality help you have...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...asts 45 minutes and consist of 2 rounds.Because you have to move a lot to conduct movem...
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...od physical manoeuvres and high stamina.If people do not live up to physical crite...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, regarding, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02364864865 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89157416479 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60472972973 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.2990785497 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.181818182 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0909090909 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292407856476 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105958855909 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590164200205 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171235863348 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734079349132 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
...has two different thoughts among people.Some suppose that the strength of mentality ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... claim physical fitness is an exact key.In my opinion, I strongly believe that bot...
^^
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...important factor for success in sports. Because having a strong mentality help you have...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...elp you have high spirit to play sports.For instance, when you play some kind of sp...
^^^
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Like
...n physically of any professional sports.Like football, a match usually lasts 45 minu...
^^^^
Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
...asts 45 minutes and consist of 2 rounds.Because you have to move a lot to conduct movem...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...asts 45 minutes and consist of 2 rounds.Because you have to move a lot to conduct movem...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...od physical manoeuvres and high stamina.If people do not live up to physical crite...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, regarding, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02364864865 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89157416479 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60472972973 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.2990785497 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.181818182 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0909090909 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292407856476 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105958855909 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590164200205 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171235863348 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734079349132 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.