Credit cards have become popular among people nowadays. Do the advantages of using credit cards outweigh disadvantages?
Since the technologies made a step beyond our imagination of the world, people has started to pay by carts more faster and easier. However,In today’s society humans commenced to use those cards everyday for anything that current individual wants to buy. Although, there some disadvantages of using credit carts, but I strongly believe that advantages overweight drawbacks of this payment method.
Firstly, the main benefit of using current payment method is that a person doesn’t need to take cash when that individual is going somewhere outside. Therefore, it is really simply to take your credit cart and go shopping without abundant amount of money in wallet. In other words, a person can not take a lot of money with you in your wallet, and with a credit card there can be any amount. For example, when a person buys an expensive car, they can't pay with cash, because it's a lot of money and it weighs a lot. Hence, credit carts is the best way to make purchases.
Secondly, the worthiest part of using credit cart is online attacks. It means that if the bank has holes in security system this can be used by hackers to create a backdoors. Likewise, this type of online thieves are very popular nowadays due to the fact that every program has their own holes in system. For instance, last year, hackers from California broke into one of the largest United States banks and stole millions of dollars from ordinary citizens. Thus, credit cards have their drawbacks , but they are not as significant compared to the advantages.
To conclude, I strongly believe that credit cards are the future and without them it would be much more difficult for humanity to live in modern society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
...rld, people has started to pay by carts more faster and easier. However,In today’s society ...
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Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , In
...by carts more faster and easier. However,In today’s society humans commenced to use...
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Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ety humans commenced to use those cards everyday for anything that current individual wa...
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Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...en a person buys an expensive car, they cant pay with cash, because its a lot of mon...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...e car, they cant pay with cash, because its a lot of money and it weighs a lot. Hen...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a backdoor' or simply 'backdoors'?
Suggestion: a backdoor; backdoors
...m this can be used by hackers to create a backdoors. Likewise, this type of online thieves ...
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Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Thus, credit cards have their drawbacks , but they are not as significant compare...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, likewise, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84827586207 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4838729491 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4584372913 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25982038066 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863883141743 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655422940409 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15002900027 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340534234602 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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