Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?
Most of the nations, around the globe, predominantly give attention on betterment of life-style of the nationals by financial growth. However, it is believed by some that giving too much importance to financial prosperity ultimately leads to the loss of some essential traditional values of the country. In my opinion, I consider that good economic expansion brings immense benefits for a nation compared to any problems it might bring.
Despite the some minor drawbacks below, I believe that economically developed countries provide tremendously good standard of life to its nationals. First of all, high quality of health and education services offered by financially sound nations that enhance quality of life. For example, every year, in the UK, government invest a considerable amount of fund on national health services to provide free basic healthcare facilities to keep nationals mentally and physically healthy. Along with this, high standard of education is provided by government of the UK and it is utterly free of cost up-to A level. Furthermore, in the financially sound countries, career services provided to people are at exponentially high level to support in their placements at various positions in the national or multinational industries. For instance, in many developed countries, government provides free career counseling and aid people to get a better job by providing various job oriented training programmes. Moreover, economically strong nation invest a huge amount to bring financial equality and to support specifically homeless, jobless, lower income household and elderly people by giving monthly payment to help them to lead better quality of life.
Admittedly, there are some issues involved when people of the nation mainly concentrate on household economy rather than social values. One problem is that people could misuse the services offered by government. In other words, sometimes, people show themselves jobless to get benefits provided by government authorities and these awful illegal acts could promote laziness among people and put extra strain on national fund. Another negative aspect is that it could be a reason of surge in the crime level at national or international level. To illustrate, when both parents got busy in their jobs and overlooked the importance of family then it could be possible that their children get involved in anti-social activities. But, these concerns are rare in developed countries as they have their strict low and legislations to mitigate these crimes level.
To conclude, economic developed countries offered extremely high standard of facilities like, better healthcare, education, career services bring lots of benefits to the nationals and clearly outweigh any disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53107344633 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87908961498 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556497175141 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8343205292 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.176470588 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190196012477 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662919585789 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707002754478 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132429267898 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362824754949 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.