The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In the age of digital 4.0, people have more chances to access online communication application that makes social media becomes an integral part of daily life and may substitute face-to-face engagement among human. However, in my point of view, social media still has many downsides over its benefits brought to our lives.
Though social media is popular nowadays, it still can not become the sole communication method due to the limitation of the number of users, the lack of emotional expressing capacity, and the dependency on internet connection. We all know that not everyone uses social media, especially elderly people and rural residents. Once face-to-face interaction is replaced, we will lose connection with people who are out the social media's border. Moreover, our conversations include not only information but also emotion which can not be expressed clearly and sufficiently via the online platform. Imagine that a couple lives apart from each other, how can they hug or kiss through the chatting screen although those gestures are just basic things to show their love. In addition, the internet connection is not always available and stable for us to have a good conversation. It depends on many factors like the devices, the servers, the internet suppliers which are out of our control.
As to the advantages, social media let us come to a new level of convenient communication. We can contact people anytime, anywhere with just an internet-connected device. In businesses, online platforms are now essential workplace where people have meetings and track the progress in remote mode.
Although social media is convenient for communication, I strongly believe that it is not able to put the direct interaction back completely unless everyone uses this platform with a globally perfect connection and technology becomes more advanced to transfer real emotion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, apart from, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34343434343 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96598407351 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632996632997 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5780406859 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.076923077 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240355062109 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823612588893 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082980930066 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143834008237 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609653819818 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.