Watching at home battles Going out to a movie.
Nowadays, movies develop rapidly and become a vital industry as well as technology. More and more people love watching movies, however, there are still many different opinions about where to go to see; while some people concur with going out to a movie, others tend to watch at home. There are some justifications namely cost, timeliness, and atmosphere.
Firstly, go to the cinema cost much more than watching a film at home. When we go to the theater, we have to buy tickets, in reality, their prices are not really stable. For example, if you buy a ticket on Sunday you have to pay the full price, and on Wednesday it costs only a half. Besides, on the weekend, we not only have to wait for the clerk to queue up for the tickets but we also line up for an hour. In contrast, watching movies at home does not cost us any fee. We can choose the film that we love easily and there are a variety of channels for you to select, it saves a lot of time and money. But the only downside is that we could not see some recent movies.
Additionally, there may be a difference in timeliness. Watching a movie on the theater we may depend on its schedule, for an instance, we manage our leisure time to go out for a movie but we are not assured that there is a film at that time. Another point is that we will miss a certain scene if we have a call or go to the toilet. In contradiction, if we stay at home for a film, we are more likely to control our time. We do not worry about losing a fabulous screen because we can replay whatever we want.
Lastly, the atmospheres of going to the cinema to watching movies are different from at home. When you go to the multiplex, you can get a better watching experience, because there are bigger screens together with realistic sound effects, and especially when climax coming everybody share the same mood with you, it can bring great visual contact. In addition, we need to accept many rules to keep the best environment and have to put on many fashion outfits. On the other hand, we can decide to watch on TV or laptop despite the shortage of big-screen and realistic sound effects. But we do not obey rules, imagine that you are lying on the sofa watching movie, and eating some snacks. It is pretty awesome.
Finally, there are manifold differences between seeing movies in the cinema and at home. If people have more money and time, or they have a dating, they can choose to go to the cinema to watch movies. On the contrary, if you more like classic movies and do not have much time, you can choose to enjoy movies at home.
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| 2020-06-17 | Nguyễn Thị Ngọc Trinh | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...tching movies, however, there are still many different opinions about where to go to see; whil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, really, so, still, well, while, for example, in addition, in contrast, as well as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 480.0 315.596192385 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35208333333 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37711802487 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4625 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2509175215 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0416666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307546034005 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10804822032 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127533372168 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216654446953 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557568371492 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.