Children are now less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern society there have been widespread discussions about the children are new less active in their free time then in the post and various explanations have been put forward. The number of advocates may strenuously anger that sports lessons must be compulsory in schools , their adversaries may claim otherwise. Considering the numerous arguments made, this essay will argue the effects of active the children and provide evidence to support my opinion.
There are number of reasons why many individuals support view that sports lessons must be compulsory in schools first and foremost save them body such as some children don’t do any exercise so that due to fat. Also sports very important for children because sport can strengthens the immunity, so it can save them from diseases. Furthermore, children can learn new activity and they can improve self them and they can follow in big team in future like in schools or college. To sum up , because of these factors it is clear that there no doubt so sports in school very benefit for children.
However, there are several of reasons why many people oppose the view that sports lessons must be compulsory in schools first of all some children feel tired for instance, they can’t focus in class. From my experience sport in school very good with my friend but don’t give more exercise in same day. As result of there aspects is apparent that there are several damages of get more exercise in same day.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of is that the government should sports lessons in schools because sports benefit in free time but don’t give to student more play in same time because they will don’t feel tired and they can complete study in class.
- Children are now less active in their free time than in the past Therefore sports lessons must be compulsory in schools To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Children are now less active in their free time than in the past Therefore sports lessons must be compulsory in schools To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Children are now less active in their free time than in the past Therefore sports lessons must be compulsory in schools To what extent do you agree or disagree 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ts lessons must be compulsory in schools , their adversaries may claim otherwise. ...
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Suggestion: Also,
...n’t do any exercise so that due to fat. Also sports very important for children beca...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'strengthen'
Suggestion: strengthen
...mportant for children because sport can strengthens the immunity, so it can save them from ...
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Suggestion: ,
...re like in schools or college. To sum up , because of these factors it is clear th...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t don’t give more exercise in same day. As result of there aspects is apparent tha...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'sport'
Suggestion: sport
... sides of is that the government should sports lessons in schools because sports benef...
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...o student more play in same time because they will don’t feel tired and they can ...
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Suggestion:
...d and they can complete study in class.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, may, so, then, while, for instance, no doubt, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88474576271 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38368619804 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505084745763 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0201612245 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281699854182 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109378702389 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643376297996 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175142172842 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495770712555 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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