It is undeniably true that we are currently living in a throw-away society and of late, it has been a prevailing concern all over the world. While many countries are predominantly working on to smartly identify what makes this issue, the complexity of the challenge still skyrocketing. This is a serious issue because it affects peoples’ both livelihood and health. Although the severity of the issue is high, societies can take steps to diminish these effects. Environmentalists are claiming that there are a plethora of causes related to this phenomenon.
The first point worth making is that related to lifestyle. We are living in a globalized, materialistic world, and all products we are purchasing from various platforms including online, shopping marts, and warehouses are wrapped either in a plastic cover or in polystyrene. Little of these can be recycled but a majority would be dumped into oceans or landfills.
It should also be mentioned that because of urbanization cities are expanding at a rapid pace and, governments are unable to tackle the waste-management system. As a result, an enormous amount of garbage has been mounting in our society.
Fortunately, however, there are some steps that both the government and individuals can take to mitigate these problems. The first solution to highlight is that people who are in authority can pass legislation forcing manufacturers to use less material in packaging. Likewise, investing money on sophisticated equipment to deal with urban wastage. It is also worth pointing out that customers need to be educated at the usage of reusable materials instead of single used ones such as zoot bags.
To conclude, increasing rubbish seems to be a serious concern which is primarily caused by not only heavy packaging but also due to a lack of rubbish management. Various solutions exist to mitigate such drawbacks including usage of reusable materials, passing a law by governments, and invest in innovative machinery., but a defined solution has yet to be found.
- You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations You believe these changes are not good for residents Write a letter to a councilor In your letter Introduce yourself Describe the problem Say what you think the council shoul 84
- Governments around the world spend too much money on treating illnesses and diseases and not enough on health and education and prevention 89
- You want to start your own small business Write a letter to a bank requesting information about obtaining a business loan to finance your new company In your letter include the following information what kind of business you want to start how much 78
- Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and lesson their working life To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people s lives Others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, so, still, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29754601227 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30498518839 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601226993865 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.9176829189 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.916666667 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14341651071 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477259877542 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460497198329 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693404469364 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203726345367 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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