Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?
With the advancements in the telecommunication sector, movie stars and sportsmen are making a lavish amount of money, much more than any other professional including politicians. This essay will talk about two key reasons for earning princely sums and would argue that this trend is a positive development.
Hard work and ability to make a positive impact on society are the two main reasons for getting such huge paychecks. Firstly, either it is a movie star of a sports personality, both of them, undergo rigorous training in order to perform outstandingly in their respective domain. For instance, Koby Brian, a famous NBA player, used to practise for about 7 hours a day to improve his craft. Secondly, these stars have millions or even billions of followers, so by sending constructive messages they can make a positive impact on the society which is not possible by other professionals. Due to such reasons, their pay scale is highly justified.
In terms of the impact of this trend, it is highly a positive advancement. The fact that celebrities can earn more money than others motivates individuals to either partake in sports or to be an actor which has the potential to bring glory to a nation by either winning a gold medal or an Oscar. To cite an evident example, whereas in the past, girls in India was only concerned about making a career in science now they are taking up sports as a career option. People like Geeta Phogat, commonwealth Gold medallist, is a living example of this phenomenon.
To conclude, the journey to becoming a celebrity is not only requires hard work but also talent. Being able to positively impact a nation or bring proud to it makes them worthy of earning more than politicians or others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...Firstly, either it is a movie star of a sports personality, both of them, undergo rigo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89189189189 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8321371313 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60472972973 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7225222226 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.384615385 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267204819357 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840660413122 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725695960955 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168483231386 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590257565182 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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